Posted by kenikov on 13:51:00 07-21-2003
I am writing an Essay a Character in Of Mice and Men to get into Honors English 10th Grade.
I would appreciate it if the members here could read it and give their opinions or notify me of typos, sentences that make no sense etc.
Please do not tell me I did something wrong without knowing 100% that I did do it wrong, unless you tell me you are not sure.
Also, it would help if you could tell me your age.
Keep in mind that this is a formal school essay to help me get into a class. It is not suppose to be exciting or suspenseful, so even if you do read just a paragraph it would help (it is four pages long).
There were many rules I had to follow, so remember it is probably the same as other High School essays, with probably a bit more rules.
The file in PDF form should instantly start downloading.
Any help I can get, even just general comments would be appreciated!
http://www10.brinkster.com/kenikov/micemen.pdf
[ This Message was edited by: kenikov on 2003-07-21 13:58 ]
You can also help me think of a good title...
[ This Message was edited by: kenikov on 2003-07-21 13:58 ]
Posted by dxprog on 01:23:00 07-22-2003
Title: Of Mice and Men - An Essay by kenikov on a book of the same title
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When I got VB, i could have flown without thrusters and shot down TIE Interceptors just by spitting at them.
[ This Message was edited by: dxprog on 2003-07-22 01:24 ]
Posted by kenikov on 03:42:00 07-22-2003
That is not allowed...
Posted by dxprog on 05:18:00 07-22-2003
I was only kidding
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Posted by kenikov on 08:49:00 07-22-2003
hehe.
I might have to use that title as I can't seem to think of one.
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Posted by php4geek on 02:47:00 07-23-2003
I can't open that link.
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Posted by kenikov on 03:32:00 07-23-2003
Hrm...it is just a PDF file.
It should open when you click on it. It worked for me.
Posted by split on 02:02:00 07-25-2003
HTTP1.1 STATUS 403 Remote Access to this object forbidden This file cannot be directly accessed from a remote site, but must be linked through the Brinkster Member's site.
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Annoying Brinkster policy. You'll have to link to it on your Web site and have people click the link.
Posted by kenikov on 08:53:00 07-25-2003
Hrm...thanks, Split.
It should work now:
http://www10.brinkster.com/kenikov/projects.html
Ignore the other stuff, it is just useless things I store on Brinkster's server
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Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
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[ This Message was edited by: kenikov on 2003-07-25 08:56 ]